By Arlene Hale, ©1965
Cover illustration by Uldis Klavins
Cover illustration by Uldis Klavins
The thunder roared and crashed
about them—but Nurse Lynn Lawrence felt that the wildness of the storm was
rivaled by the frantic racing of her own thoughts. She cast a glance at her fiancé,
Greg Avery. Beside him, huddled helplessly, was the pretty Dawn Evans. There
was no doubt that Greg was paying a great deal of attention to comforting
Dawn—too much, Lynn thought. But there was another in the group of
flood-marooned strangers. He was handsome, and smiled at Lynn in a way that
sent the heart fluttering. Surely things would right themselves once they got
back to civilization. But in a disaster like this, a short time could lead to a
broken-hearted eternity.
GRADE: C
BEST QUOTES:
“I’m not very hot for hardware.”
REVIEW:
I had assumed that Lynn Lawrence would be a public service nurse who
manned the battle stations during a disaster, à la Disaster Nurse, but no, Lynn is
actually just a nurse who gets caught in a disaster. She and her fiancé Greg
Avery are taking a bus to Lynn’s rural home, where Greg is to finally meet her
parents—and he is none too happy about it, either—when ferocious rains cause
the rivers to flood, stranding Lynn, Greg, four other passengers, the bus
driver, and a passing motorist at a nearby farmhouse. Completely surrounded by
water, the motley crew tries to make the best of things. Well, not all of them:
Greg is whining and crabby at the outset. Actually, Greg’s downfall is not
entirely unsuspected, as he’s one of these boyfriends about whom few
compliments can be paid even from the opening pages, where he is billed as
intense, nervous, skeptical, impatient, and resentful. One can easily see why
Lynn wants to marry him.
He’s not the only one who can’t keep it together: Poor little Dawn
Evans spends most of her time shrieking or sobbing, and only Greg seems to be
able to comfort her. When Dawn is unable to get to her bedroom alone, it’s Greg
who accompanies her, while Lynn watches, “an alarm bell ringing in her
head.” When Lynn follows them a few
minutes later, she finds Greg holding the weeping Dawn in his arms, puts Dawn
to bed with a glass of water and an aspirin, then hauls Greg off by the ear for
a few words. He just seems pleased that she’s jealous. “Sometimes you’re so
self-sufficient, I wonder what you can see in me,” he tells her. Uh oh.
Hypocrisy soon unfolds in spades when the motorist
they’re stranded with, Marshall Davis, starts trotting around after Lynn, grabs
her in the hallway and only lets go when Lynn insists—but soon he’s back, kissing
her and telling her that he’s in love with her, which is certainly farther than
Greg has gotten with Dawn. Though she feels “she was already throwing her pride
to the winds where Greg was concerned, almost begging him to concentrate on
her, to forget another woman,” at the same time when Marshall corners her
again, “this time when he kissed her she was too tired to fight him.”
As this love quadrangle is unfolding, the 7-year-old
daughter of the couple who live in the farmhouse, little Diane Wilson, has
inconveniently decided this is the time to come down with appendicitis. Lynn attempts
to “scatter the infection” with cold packs to the abdomen and the four
remaining aspirins in the house (too bad she wasted one on the hysterical
Dawn!), but those of us with a nodding acquaintance with modern medicine will
not be surprised to learn this doesn’t work. Eventually Lynn, who has been
keeping mum for some bizarre reason about the seriousness of Diane’s condition,
confesses to Marshall how sick the child actually is, and Marshall sets about
building a boat so as to go for help. Needless to say, his desperate voyage is
made in the pitch black of night and involves encounters with large floating
trees and a ducking or two, but soon a helicopter is landing in the back yard
to take the girl off to the hospital. The next day the boats come to rescue
them, and back in civilization, Lynn and Greg decide to end their
engagement—but not to worry, by the time the day is over, there are two new ones
to announce.
This book isn’t terrible, but the double standard Lynn
operates under is just perplexing. I was sorry that our heroine, an outstanding
surgical nurse (are there any other kind in a VNRN?), didn’t just do the
appendectomy herself, like in Wings
for Nurse Bennett, but our heroine isn’t that strong. The marooned-on-an-island plot has lots of promise—just
ask any of the innumerable books, movies, and TV shows that have done well with
it—but Arlene Hale is too pedantic to score any real success with it. The story
unfolds automatically, with little suspense or excitement, so there’s really
not much to be gained from reading it. With a title as fantastic as Disaster Area Nurse, the disappointment
is all the worse.
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